A consistent graphic identity and writing style are essential for strengthening communication with the audiences of Harvey Mudd College.
This editorial style guide covers writing style, usage and style issues particular to Harvey Mudd College. These standards apply to all College materials published for an external audience. The style guide follows The Associated Press Stylebook and Webster’s Collegiate Dictionary.
The Chicago Manual of Style is used as a secondary source for information not supplied in the primary references.
The following style guide refers to these sources, lists some exceptions to them and lists words and phrases specific to Harvey Mudd College. Examples are provided in italics.
Harvey Mudd’s Alumni Association Board of Governors.
“Accept” means to receive; “except” means to exclude.
Lowercase bachelor of arts, a bachelor’s degree, an associate degree (no possessive), a master of arts in engineering, a master’s, a doctorate in mathematics, an honorary doctorate. Abbreviations of two letters should include periods:
- B.S., M.A., J.D., M.S.
No periods for abbreviations with three or more letters (BSEE, MBA). Exception: Ph.D. and LL.M.
Preferred sentence format:
- Lexi Jones, who earned a bachelor of science degree from Harvey Mudd College, has been appointed CEO of ABC Company.
- Lexi Jones, who earned a B.S. from Santa Clara University…
If more than one graduate from the same family is mentioned, the preferred format is:
- Stan ’65 and Mary Smith ’82 attended the reunion.
Capitalize (e.g., A, C+, D-) and use an apostrophe for plural instances: He has three A’s and one D.
Note: Academic grades do not take quotes and are different than letters used as letters. See words used as words.
Official department names, followed by second reference format :
- Department of Biology; biology department or biology
- Department of Chemistry; chemistry department or chemistry
- Computer Science Department; computer science department or computer science (per CS department)
- Department of Engineering; engineering department or engineering
- Department of Humanities, Social Sciences, and the Arts (an exception to AP rule on series comma); HSA (preferred, on second reference)
- Department of Mathematics; mathematics department or mathematics
- Department of Physics; physics department or physics
Lowercase general references: She is a physics major; he is studying computational biology.
Capitalize and spell out formal titles such as professor, director, chair, etc., when they precede a name. Lowercase elsewhere. Lowercase modifiers such as “department.” (AP Stylebook).
Conference organizers have nominated department Chair Kelly Wilder.
Zach Dodds is a professor of computer science.
The talk was given by physics professors Rex Matlof and Cindy Smith.
Whenever possible, include named professorships when faculty members are named to these positions: Susan and Bruce Worster Professor of Physics John S. Townsend, instead of simply Professor of Physics John S. Townsend. For ease of readability, the endowed professorship title can be listed after the name.
- …said Erik Spjut, professor of engineering and Union Oil Company Engineering Design Fellow.
When talking about places with accommodations for people with disabilities, use the term “accessible” rather than “disabled” or “handicapped.” For example, refer to an “accessible parking space” rather than a “disabled” or “handicapped” parking space or “an accessible bathroom stall” rather than a “handicapped” bathroom stall.
See also disabled.
For more information, refer to the National Clearinghouse on Disability and Exchange.
Use abbreviations “Ave.,” “Blvd.” and “St.” only with a numbered address: 301 Platt Blvd.
Spell out and capitalize when part of a formal street name without a number: Platt Boulevard.
Lowercase and spell out when used alone or with more than one street name: Platt and Dartmouth boulevards.
All similar words (alley, drive, place, terrace, etc.) are always spelled out. Capitalize when part of a formal name without a number; lowercase when used alone or with two or more names.
Spell out and capitalize “First” through “Ninth” when used as street names; use figures for “10th” and above.
Abbreviate compass points: 301 E. Second St. However, do not abbreviate if number is omitted: West Foothill Boulevard. Exception: compass points may be spelled out in formal publications, if desired.
No periods in quadrant abbreviations—NW, SE—unless customary locally.
“Advisor” instead of “adviser.” (This is HMC’s preference and differs from AP Stylebook.)
African American (Black)
People of African descent living in the United States. “Black” is an inclusive term for people of African descent, including, but not limited to, people from North and South America, the Caribbean and Africa.
Use figures to express a person’s age but not the age of an inanimate object.
Use whole numbers only, no fractions or decimals. List ages with a comma on both sides: Sally, 12, and Randy, 10, both collect toys.
See also numbers.
Lowercase, no periods.
all right (adverb)
All right, not alright.
Alumnus (male singular), alumna (female, singular), alumnae (female, plural), alumni (plural male, or plural to include both male and female). Avoid using the informal “alum.”
Do not place class year in parentheses or use a comma between name and class year. Keep last name and grad year together on the same line in publications (adjust tracking if necessary).
Greg Zindfel ’88. (Use a single apostrophe, slanting to the left.)
Josh Minkel ’77/78. (Received a bachelor’s and master’s degree from Harvey Mudd. The College’s master’s program was discontinued in 2003.)
Bill Burns ’87 and wife, Sally PZ ’75, are joining us. (Abbreviations for The Claremont Colleges—SCR, POM, PZ, CMC, CGU, KGI. Used in the HMC Catalogue and when listing a spouse who graduated from those colleges.)
Radio transmission systems, capitalized, no periods.
a.m., p.m. (include periods). Noon and midnight are neither a.m. nor p.m. Designate as noon or midnight.
Among, not amongst.
Avoid, except if it is part of a company’s official title, or in a few accepted abbreviations: B&B.
Incorrect: Humanities & Social Sciences.
Annual Mudd Fundd
Annual Mudd Fundd (yes, two d’s)
Indicates possessive, contraction or missing letters/numbers. Use for plural of single letters only, not to pluralize acronyms or numbers.
In printed documents, use closing/slanting left ( ’ ) single apostrophe in front of the class year.
Don’t use apostrophes to pluralize numerical figures or acronyms; just add s: He lived during the 1930s. Who are the VIPs? The airplanes are 747s. Temperatures will be in the high 90s. He took the SATs yesterday.
For plurals of grades and some instances of single letters, use an apostrophe: Her report card contained three A’s and five D’s. Be on your p’s and q’s.
See also words used as words.
Titles of apps are set roman (no italics or quotation marks).
Associated Students of Harvey Mudd College.
People of Asian descent living in the United States, including, but not limited to, people of Chinese, Japanese, Korean, Vietnamese, Cambodian, Filipino and Nepalese heritage. People from India prefer to be called South Asian. People from Pakistan may prefer to be called West Asian.
Capitalize them: Medal of Honor, Outstanding Alumni Award, etc.
Lowercase, no hyphen.
Not barbeque. “BBQ” may be acceptable on space-sensitive materials.
Acronym for Beginners’ All-Purpose Symbolic Instruction Code. Use of acronym on first reference is acceptable if identified as a programming language.
Hyphenate in all uses.
“Biannual” means twice a year and is a synonym of the word “semiannual.” “Biennial” means every two years.
Means every other week. “Semiweekly” means twice a week.
Lowercase in reference to race and color.
Capitalize when an integral part of a proper name:
- Harvey Mudd Board of Trustees
- The board of trustees met on Sunday.
- He is a member of the board.
- He serves on the Executive Committee of the board of trustees.
See also committees.
When they are used, capitalize them (AstroTurf, Fritos). It is not necessary to include the copyright or trademark symbols— © ™ —in conjunction with the name.
It is recommended that the full name of campus buildings be used on first reference in most publications. If the audience is internal (alumni, students, employees), use of the formal name may not be necessary. When including a room number, use the second-reference name with the number: Parsons 1287.
Formal/complete name; second reference:
- F.W. Olin Science Center; Olin
- W.M. Keck Laboratories; Keck
- Beckman Hall; Beckman
- Norman F. Sprague Center; Sprague Center or Sprague
- Galileo Hall; Galileo
- Parsons Engineering Building; Parsons
- Jacobs Science Center; Jacobs
- Hixon Court
- Booth Plaza
- Kingston Hall; Kingston
- Braun Liquidambar Mall; Liquidambar Mall
- Joseph B. Platt Campus Center; Platt Campus Center or Platt
- Hoch-Shanahan Dining Commons; Hoch-Shanahan Dining Hall
- Marks Residence Hall (South Hall); South Dorm or South
- West Hall; West Dorm or West
- North Hall; North Dorm or North
- Mildred E. Mudd Hall (East Hall); East Dorm or East
- Ronald and Maxine Linde Activities Center; Linde or the LAC
- Garrett House
- J.L. Atwood Residence Hall; Atwood Hall or Atwood
- Frederick and Susan Sontag Residence Hall; Sontag Hall or Sontag
- Case Residence Hall; Case Dorm or Case
- Ronald and Maxine Linde Residence Hall; Linde Dorm or Linde
- R. Michael Shanahan Center for Teaching and Learning; Shanahan Center for Teaching and Learning or Shanahan Center
The Campaign for Harvey Mudd College (full, formal name). Second reference: the Harvey Mudd College campaign; the campaign
The campaign theme is “Harvey Mudd is on a mission” (no period).
Harvey Mudd College Catalogue.
Instead of chairman, chairwoman or chairperson.
Two words, no hyphen, in all cases.
“Chicano/Chicana” is a term reflecting pride in the indigenous roots of the Mexican-American people.
See also Latino/Latina and Hispanic.
Place commas between the city and state and after the state name: He was traveling from Rancho Cucamonga, Calif., to St. Louis, Mo., to get to his new job.
Per AP Styleguide, the following major cities (due to their popularity and singularity) do not require state or country identification: Atlanta, Baltimore, Boston, Chicago, Cincinnati, Cleveland, Dallas, Denver, Detroit, Honolulu, Indianapolis, Las Vegas, Los Angeles, Miami, Milwaukee, Minneapolis, New Orleans, New York, Oklahoma City, Philadelphia, Phoenix, Pittsburgh, St. Louis, Salt Lake City, San Antonio, San Diego, San Francisco, Seattle and Washington.
See also states.
The Claremont Colleges
“The” is capitalized.
Five-College, 5-College, 5-Cs, 7-College, 7-Cs.
Acceptable abbreviations for each of The Claremont Colleges: HMC, SCR, POM, PZ, CMC, CGU, KGI.
Claremont University Consortium
The central coordinating and support organization for the seven institutions, created in 2000. Previously known as “Claremont University Center.” Also known as “the Consortium.”
Capitalize alumni classes: Class of 1963; Class of 1990.
Do not capitalize class years: sophomore; junior; senior.
Preferred term for entering students is “first years” instead of “freshman/men.” She is a first-year student. They are first years. He is a first year.
The intercollegiate athletic program of Harvey Mudd College, Scripps and Claremont McKenna. Women’s teams are known as the Athenas, men’s as the Stags.
A nationally recognized program begun at HMC in 1963.
- Harvey Mudd Clinic Program
- Clinic Program
- Clinic fee
- Clinic project
- Engineering Clinic
- Global Clinic
- Physics Clinic team
- He is a Clinic director
- Clinic Director John Smith
See also Projects Day.
“The College” is acceptable terminology for Harvey Mudd College on second reference: Harvey Mudd College is located in Claremont, Calif. The College is known for its honor code.
Spell out college names in most instances, especially on first reference. The following well-known abbreviations are acceptable, even on first reference: Caltech (not CalTech), UC Berkeley, UCLA, USC.
See also Harvey Mudd College.
Any structure can follow a colon: a complete sentence, a single word or word groups. If a complete sentence follows a colon, it is initial capped. Otherwise, for lists and single words, the first word should be lowercase (unless it is a proper noun).
- He needed three things from Home Depot: a hammer, nails and plywood.
- The answer to the Final Jeopardy question was obvious: World War II.
- He wasn’t sure: Should he go to France or to Spain?
Use one space only after a colon.
Place colons outside of quotation marks unless they are part of the quotation itself.
Commas are always placed inside quotation marks: “It is time to go,” said Sam.
Per AP Stylebook guidelines, do not use a so-called serial comma at the end of a series before the word “and”: She enjoys swimming, singing, eating and driving.
Exception: include the comma if clarification calls for it: My three favorite kinds of sandwiches are turkey, banana, and peanut butter and jelly.
Use commas with identifiers if the identifier is “the only one.”
Example without commas: I went to see the movie Shrek 2 with my friend Hannah.
There is no comma before Shrek 2 because it is not the only movie in existence. There is no comma before “Hannah” because she is not the speaker’s only friend.
Example with commas: I think Prince is awesome, but my wife, Mary, disagrees.
The speaker has only one wife. Where exclusiveness or uniqueness is implied, use commas.
Capitalize official names of committees:
- Admission Committee
- Dormitory Affairs Committee
- Executive Committee
compose, comprise, constitute
“Compose” means to create or put together.
“Comprise” means to contain, to include all or embrace.
“Constitute,” in the sense of form or make up, may be the best word if neither “compose” nor “comprise” seems to fit.
Core, Common Core
cross-country, cross-country team
Course titles should be capitalized, with no quotes or italics: Introduction to Biology
Spell out full course title on first reference, even for courses that are well known internally: Introduction to Writing (Writ 1, second reference).
Use an en-dash (option-hyphen on Macintosh; Alt + 0150 on PC) between numbers or dates.
- The test will be held Feb. 4–8.
- Fiscal year 2006–2007
- Her schedule consists of 15–16 credit hours.
A regular keyboard dash is used for email addresses (e.g., email@example.com).
Use an em-dash (shift-option-hyphen on Macintosh, Alt + 0151 on PC) without spaces on either side for:
- Interruptions in thought: Victor knew the answer—which was rare for him—and raised his hand.
- A series within a phrase: He gave his reasons—safety, security, fear—for locking his door.
Write out March, April, May, June and July. Abbreviate only Jan., Feb., Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov. and Dec. But do not abbreviate months when they stand alone or appear with only a year:
- The anniversary was Sept. 3, 2030.
- She will perform in August 2020.
For a range of dates with months, use “through” in body copy; use an en-dash in calendar listings.
For a range of years, write out both years and use an en-dash: 2005–2006.
In some instances, usually programs and invitations, writing out the month is acceptable and often preferred. Use the day of the week with the date for clarification when possible: The lecture will be Friday, June 23, at 8 p.m. in Galileo Hall.
Never add an ordinal (“st,” “nd,” “rd,” or “th”) after the number in a date. Incorrect: June 1st, 2nd, 3rd or 15th. Correct: June 1, 2, 3 or 15.
Use numerals for centuries (e.g., 18th century). Add a dash when it’s used as an adjective (e.g., 21st-century style).
Except in media releases, it is not necessary to refer to the year in body copy unless the date is in a different calendar year.
Two words, no hyphen, in all uses.
See academic degrees.
Capitalize academic departments and administrative offices when using the full formal title. Lowercase informal title, the preferable usage in body copy.
- Office of Institutional Advancement, advancement office
- Office of Career Services, career services
- Note: Office of Admission (not Admissions), admission office
Use “department” for academic departments; use “office” to refer to administrative departments.
Use figures and spell out inches, feet, yards, etc., to indicate depth, height, length and width.
- He is 4 feet 6 inches tall.
- The 5-foot-2-inch woman.
- The polo team signed a 6-footer.
- The carpet is 6 feet by 10 feet.
- The building has 70,000 square feet of floor space.
It is okay to use words or phrases such as “disabled,” “disability” or “people with disabilities” when talking about disability issues. Ask the people you are with which term they prefer if they have a disability. Refer to a person’s disability only when it is related to what you are talking about.
Don’t use the terms “handicapped,” “differently-abled,” “cripple/crippled,” “retarded,” “poor,” “unfortunate” or “special needs.” Don’t say “victim of,” “suffering from” or “stricken with” a disability; instead, say the person “has a disability.”
See also accessible.
For more information, refer to the National Clearinghouse on Disability and Exchange.
Use a dollar sign followed by a numeral. Do not use “.00″ with dollar values:
- $500 (not $500.00)
- $8.9 million
- Incorrect (the word “dollars” is redundant): $1 million dollars
For large numbers, spell out: $1 million instead of $1,000,000.
Can be used in place of “residence hall” when referring to Harvey Mudd student housing (e.g., “Sontag Dorm” instead of “Sontag Residence Hall,”). The proper name is preferred in formal usage.
dot com (n), dot-com (adj)
- She was hired by the dot com last year.
- The effects of the dot-com bust have been devastating.
Lowercase when they indicate compass direction: Drive north on Indian Hill to Foothill Blvd.
Capitalize when they designate regions:
- They live in Southern California.
- He was born in the Lower East Side of New York.
- It is the biggest city on the West Coast. (denoting entire region)
- It is snowing in the eastern United States.
Do not use courtesy title “Dr.” before a name, even on first reference, unless person has a medical or veterinary degree. On second reference, use last name only.
Do not hyphenate. Do not underline emails in body text.
Abbreviation for “for example”; followed by a comma.
Capitalize when used as the proper name of the planet:
- The astronaut returned to Earth.
- She planned to move heaven and earth to complete her degree.
Use a three-point ellipsis with spaces before and after to indicate deleted text. Use a four-point ellipsis, with a space after but not before, to denote the end of a complete sentence (Option semi-colon for Macintosh, Alt +0133 for PC)
- Her speech included discussion about computers, food, staplers, lamps … more topics than one could believe.
- He was a man of many talents….
Emeritus (man singular), emerita (woman singular), emeriti (plural, includes both men and women).
“Ensure” means to guarantee. Use “insure” for references to insurance.
Entitled means a right to do or have something. Do not use when referring to titles of works.
- Correct: He was entitled to the award.
- Correct: The paper is titled “My Best Research.”
The word “faculty” takes a singular verb. Use “faculty members” and “staff members” to avoid awkward singular constructions.
Frequently asked questions. Don’t use periods or apostrophe.
“Farther” refers to physical distance: He walked farther into the campus.
“Further” refers to an extension of time or degree: She will look further into the problem.
first come, first served
Not “first serve.”
first-year, first year(s)
Preferred over use of term “freshman/men”:
- She is a first-year student.
- The event is open to first years.
See also class.
Usually described as a span of years: The new director will begin sometime during fiscal year 2020–2021.
Adjective and adverb.
Preferred term for handbill/poster or an aviator.
Forward, not forwards.
See also first-year, first year(s).
Not hyphenated .
No periods. Spell out on first reference: grade point average.
See academic grades.
“Disabled” is the preferred term.
Harvey Mudd College, HMC, the College
Use “Harvey Mudd College” on first reference. In subsequent references, use “Harvey Mudd” or “the College.” “HMC” is appropriate for internal audiences.
Capitalize words in headlines that are longer than three letters (including prepositions), or that begin or end a headline, regardless of length. Don’t use punctuation unless it’s a question mark or (sparingly) an exclamation point.
A term grouping all people of Spanish-speaking descent. This is the preferred inclusive term in some regions, especially in the Southwest.
When known, a more specific identification should be used: Cuban, Puerto Rican, Mexican-American (people of Mexican descent living in the United States).
See also Chicano/Chicana and Latino/Latina.
Honor Code, HMC’s
Capitalize unless referring to an honor code in general.
- The Harvey Mudd College Honor Code is well known.
- She reported the infraction because she is bound by our Honor Code.
- A college honor code is an important feature.
hyphenation, word division (when typing)
At the end of a line, do not break a word following a short vowel (e.g. trans-ition, not transi-tion).
Hyphenations should follow a vowel only if it has a long sound (e.g. communica-tion).
Avoid three or more consecutive end-of-line hyphens.
When jumping to another page, do not hyphenate a word.
Avoid breaking first or last names, names and class years, dates and numerical units (e.g. $500 million; keep the figure together).
Hyphenate re- words when they contain an “e”: re-examine.
Abbreviate and do not precede with a comma.
Do not separate with a space: R.C. Cola.
It is acceptable to begin Web addresses without “http://” or “www.” Example: hmc.edu.
Consider the audience when deciding whether or not to add “www.” It is best practice to test any web address before publishing.
Capitalize “Internet,” “Web” and “World Wide Web.”
Lowercase website, web page, webcast, webmaster
See also quotation marks and titles.
Use italics—not boldface, underlining or caps—for general emphasis: She was absolutely not going to attend.
Punctuation following an italicized word is also italicized, including a possessive: Fortune’s list of 500 influential leaders.
But open and close quotes and parentheses always match, even if the last word is in italics: “Did you read Glamour?” she asked.
Works that exist as a smaller part of a larger work are placed in quotation marks.
Italics are also used for certain scientific names, court case names and named vessels, vehicles and aircraft.
“Its” is possessive. “It’s” means “it is.”
Abbreviate as “Jr.” and “Sr.” and do not precede with a comma: Manny Smith Sr.
Refers to people of Latin American origin. It is an emerging inclusive term for people from North America, Central America, South America and the Spanish-speaking Caribbean.
See also Chicano/Chicana and Hispanic.
lecture or speech title
Set off with quotes. Do so with academic article titles also.
login/logon/logoff (n, adj)
log in/log on/log off (v)
Captialize: Mach 1, Mach 2.
Loren (Shay) Ross; Loren Shay Ross if used as full name.
Master of Ceremonies, Mistress of Ceremonies
Not “Master of Ceremony.” More than one host, regardless of gender: Masters of Ceremonies.
Do not hyphenate unless preceding a capitalized word or a figure: midday; mid-September; mid-1940s.
An inclusive term referring to people from a region in western Asia and northeast Africa that includes but is not limited to the nations of the Arabian Peninsula, Egypt, Iran, Iraq, Israel, Jordan, Lebanon, Syria and Turkey. The term “Arab” traditionally refers to a person from the Arabian Peninsula.
Use instead of “12 a.m.” or “12 midnight.” Capitalization is not necessary, unless at the beginning of a line or sentence.
For amounts of $1 up to $999,999.99, use the dollar sign with a decimal point to separate dollars from cents.
Leave the decimal point and zeroes off of even dollar amounts.
For even amounts of $1 million or more, omit zeroes and use “million,” “billion,” etc.
- $7 million
- $2.2 billion
For amounts less than a dollar, spell out the word “cents,” lowercase and use numerals.
- 78 cents
- 10 cents’ worth
Spell out March, April, May, June and July.
Abbreviate Jan., Feb., Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov. and Dec.
Do not abbreviate months when they stand alone or appear with only a year:
- The anniversary was Sept. 3, 2002.
- She will perform in August 2005.
See also dates.
Capitalize. Refers, in particular, to alumni and students—but can also refer to faculty and staff—of Harvey Mudd College.
The dictionary defines “mudder” as “a race horse that performs especially well on a wet, muddy track.”
Indigenous people who inhabited the Americas and Caribbean prior to the European conquest. Many Native Americans use “tribe” in referring to their people. Recommended usage is to refer, whenever possible, to a particular people or nation by name: Iroquois, Navajo, Cherokee, Sioux, etc.
Italicize the names of newspapers. Capitalize “the” in a newspaper’s name if this is the publication’s official name (per AP Stylebook): the Los Angeles Times; The New York Times.
See also titles.
Use quotations when inserted into the identification of an individual. Eric is known as “Scoop.” Mrs. Mary “Trigger” Smith.
Commonly used nicknames may be subsituted for a first name without the use of quotation marks: Pinky Nelson is an astronaut.
Capitalize without quotation marks such terms as Sunshine State, Old Glory.
Refers to terrorist events on Sept. 11, 2001.
Use instead of “12 p.m.” Capitalization is not necessary, unless at the beginning of a line or sentence.
Spell out numbers from one to nine, use numerals for numbers 10 and above However, spell out a number at the beginning of a sentence or expressed in quotations.
Always use figures to express a person’s age, but not the age of an inanimate object.
Use decimals, not fractions, in body text. Use commas with numbers in the thousands: 5,234.
Ordinals follow the number rule: Spell out “first” through “ninth,” use figures for “10th” and higher. Do not superscript the ordinal.
Always use numerals for percentages regardless of whether the number is above or below 10.
Capitalization: Page 3, Room 24, Group 2.
Spell out the word “percent,” but not the numeral preceding “percent.” (e.g. 99 percent, 4 percent). Use the symbol “%” in charts. Precede decimal with a zero for amounts less than 1 percent (0.3 percent). The verb used with percent depends on whether its entity is singular or plural: Nearly 20 percent of the class is sleeping; Only 15 percent of the teachers are camping.
Scholastic credit hours use numerals: To be considered a full-time student, you must take 12 semester hours of credit.
“No. 1″ is preferred in body text over “number one,” unless quoted.
Use figures and spell out inches, feet, yards, etc., to indicate depth, height, length and width. Hyphenate adjectival forms before nouns.
- He is 4 feet 3 inches tall; the 6-foot-1-inch woman; the 7-foot man; the basketball team signed a 6-footer.
- The car is 17 feet long, 6 feet wide and 5 feet high.
- The rug is 6 feet by 12 feet; the 6-by-12-foot rug.
- The storm left 5 inches of snow.
- The building has 70,000 square feet of floor space.
Non-academic areas are offices: Office of Career Services; career services office (second reference).
See also departments.
over, more than
Use “more than” with numerals; use “over” when referring to spatial relationships.
People of the islands in the Pacific Ocean including three major ethnic groups: Polynesians (Tahitians, Samoans, Hawaiians and others); Micronesians (U.S. Trust Territories, Guam, Wake Island, Bikini and Kwajelin); Melanesians (New Zealand, Australia and the Solomans).
Use figures and capitalize: The article is on Page 5.
Do not hyphenate when letters are added: Page 4B.
HMC parents are noted as such by a “P” and the year their student will graduate/graduated following a parent’s name. There are no spaces, nor is there an apostrophe before the year: Sam and Mary Smith P08 are happy to volunteer.
The word takes a singular verb when standing alone or when a singular word follows an “of” construction: The professor said 60 percent was a failing grade. He said 10 percent of the membership was present.
It takes a plural verb when a plural word follows an “of” construction. She said 30 percent of the members were there.
Use figures for percent and percentages: 5 percent, 10.2 percent (no fractions), 6 percentage points
A range: 10 to 14 percent; between 40 and 55 percent
For amounts less than 1 percent, precede the decimal with a zero: The cost of living rose 0.3 percent.
Use one space after a period in running text.
Preferred format: 909.621.8011
Write extensions as extension 234 or ext. 234 not x234.
Generally do not hyphenate when using a prefix with a word starting with a consonant. Some exceptions:
- Except for common usage like “cooperate” and “coordinate,” use a hyphen if the prefix ends in a vowel and the word that follows begins with the same vowel.
- Use a hyphen if the word that follows is capitalized.
- Use a hyphen if the word my be visually difficult to read or may be mistaken for a word with different meaning: The co-donors were happy to help. The tennis player re-served the ball.
- Use a hyphen to join doubled prefixes: sub-subparagraph
A first performance.
Not “Presentations Day.”
Not “Project Days.” See also Clinic.
Acceptable abbreviation for a question and answer session.
Commas and periods always go inside quotation marks. Place semicolons outside of quotation marks. Place colons outside of quotation marks unless they are part of the quotation itself.
When ending a sentence with quoted material inside of other quoted material such as dialogue, the single and double quote always stay together: “You know what they say: ‘When in Rome.’”
Quotation marks are used for the following:
- Individual episodes of a TV series
- Individual songs on an album
- Poems, stories, book chapters, essays
- Lectures, speeches, presentation titles
- Musical compositions
See also titles.
radio/TV call letters
Use all caps: WBZ-AM, ABC-TV.
Can be used when referring to Harvey Mudd College student housing. “Dorm” is also acceptable.
No accents (AP Stylebook).
Lowercase “reunion” unless part of an official name or headline: the reunion; the reunion dinner; 50th reunion; 40th Reunion Gift Fund.
Use without periods. An abbreviation of the French phrase “respondez s’il vous plait,” or, in English, “Respond if you please.” Never use the redundant phrase “Please RSVP”; you are then saying “Please respond if you please.” It’s better to just say “RSVP by …” or “RSVP to 607.8335.”
Lowercase when used informally: fall semester; summer 2010; spring break. Capitalize as part of a formal name: Winter Olympics, Summer Olympics.
Used to indicate a greater separation of thought than a comma can convey but less than the separation a period implies. Semicolons are also used to clarify complicated series: His favorite bands are Hall and Oates; Earth, Wind and Fire; and Hootie and the Blowfish.
Always place semicolons outside of quotation marks.
Spell out when standing alone: She was originally from Kansas but moved to California.
Use AP Style abbreviations with cities in body text: We traveled south from Dover, Del., to Tallahassee, Fla.
Abbreviate all state names per AP except the following, which are always spelled out: Alaska, Hawaii, Idaho, Iowa, Maine, Ohio, Texas and Utah.
Use postal codes only with full mailing addresses that include zip code: 301 Platt Blvd., Claremont, CA 91711.
To stand still is to be stationary.
Writing paper is stationery.
Noun and adjective.
Summer Undergraduate Research Program
It is acceptable to use “summer research program” on second reference.
“TV” is acceptable as an adjective or noun. For formatting television programs, see titles.
When the idea is essential to the sentence—helps identify the main idea—use “that” without a comma: This is a day that I will never forget.
When the idea is added information—good but not essential—use “which” and commas: Potato chips, which are high in salt, are not part of a heart-healthy diet.
Hint: Clauses using “which” are usually separated from the main idea by a comma or commas. If you can remove the clause and not alter the meaning of the sentence, “which” should be used.
Always lowercase “the,” except in newspaper or book titles where the first word has been designated by the publication as part of the title: the Los Angeles Times; the New York Post; The Washington Post; The New York Times.
Another exception: The Claremont Colleges.
Unless referring to a proper name spelled “theatre”
Referring to three-dimensional items
Always use “a.m.” and “p.m.” with periods. Use and en-dash, closed up, to separate most ranges of time.
Except for noon and midnight, all time should be expressed numerically, omitting zeros for tops of hours: 8 a.m.; 6:22 p.m.; 11 a.m.–3:30 p.m.; 9–10:15 a.m.
Do not repeat “a.m.” or “p.m.” if within the same time period: 8–10 a.m. instead of 8 a.m.–10 a.m.
For formal invitations, programs and similar documents, authors may opt to use zeros: 8:00 a.m.–3:00 p.m
If using the word “from,” use the corresponding “to” instead of an en-dash: The event lasts from 9 a.m. to 3:12 p.m.
The word “on” is seldom needed when referring to a time or date: She arrived Monday.
Capitalize titles when they appear immediately before a proper name.
- President Maria Klawe spoke at the event.
- Maria Klawe, president of Harvey Mudd College, signed the agreement.
- Professor of Chemistry Lester Jones developed a new class.
- Mary Beakin, chair of the department and professor of economics, is on vacation.
- The dean agreed with the committee.
TV programs, movies, music albums, books, plays, magazines, and newspapers should be italicized: Who’s the Boss?; Braveheart; Michael Jackson’s Thriller; the Los Angeles Times; The Sun Also Rises; Harvey Mudd College Bulletin; Hamlet.
Online magazines, journals and scholarly publications also should be italicized: Salon; Bloomberg.
Works of art (paintings, drawings, sculptures) are italicized (Chicago Manual of Style): Rodin’s The Thinker; Mona Lisa.
Video game titles and titles of apps are set roman (no italics or quotation marks).
Do not italicize the name of a newspaper or periodical when it is part of the name of a building, organization, prize or the like: Los Angeles Times Book Award, Tribune Tower.
Use quotation marks for:
- Individual episodes of a TV series
- Individual songs on an album
- Poems, stories, book chapters, essays
- Lectures, speeches, presentation titles
- Musical compositions
Not “towards,” which is more common in British English.
Capitalize only if used before the name of a member of Harvey Mudd’s board of trustees: Harvey Mudd Trustee Norman Sprague; Sprague was a trustee of Harvey Mudd College.
In reference to the website only, always capped. “Tweet” can be a noun or verb; lowercase: The instructor tweeted a link to the article; the athlete sent a late-night tweet.
Two words in virtually all uses: The project is under way; the maneuvers are under way.
One word when used as an adjective before a noun in a nautical sense: an underway flotilla.
Spell out when used as a noun. “U.S.” should be used only as a preceding adjective. “American” typically refers to citizens of the United States and should rarely be used as an adjective in place of “U.S.”
University of California, CSU system institutions
Spell out on first reference in most instances. Exceptions are well-known universities that cannot be confused with any other college: UCLA, Caltech.
The use of “http://” and “www.” is not usually necessary in running text. Web addresses should set roman, no italics or underlines: Visit hmc.edu for more information.
Avoid breaking URLs across multiple lines of text, if possible.
Well-known websites do not require URL identification: Facebook; Google; Buzzfeed.
See also Internet, website
video game titles
Video game titles are set roman (no italics or quotation marks).
website, webmaster, Web address, World Wide Web, Web page
Lowercase “website,” “webcam,” “webcast” and “webmaster.” Only capitalize in reference to “World Wide Web” or “the Web.”
Website names set roman without quotes or italics: She suggested we view ted.com.
See also Internet, URL.
West Coast, the West
Lowercase if used as a directional indicator. See also directions.
Members of the current majority culture in the United States. While the term “Caucasian” is commonly used in place of white, neither a common ancestry related to the Caucasus Mountains region, nor an assumption that all whites are culturally or ethnically homogeneous, should be assumed.
Two words, lowercase, when used to refer to a special report.
words used as words
Use quotation marks for words used as words and letters used as letters: Please use the term “disabled” in place of “handicapped”; I’d like to buy an “F,” Pat Sajak.
works of art
Use an en-dash when expressing a range of years.
The College’s preferred format is to express a range of years fully: 1996–1998, 1985–2001.
See also dates.
Do not separate the state from its zip code. Rancho Cucamonga, CA 91701.